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Companion Piece to Musings In The Night. Legolas arrives in Imladris.
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[Maedhros & Aragorn] The meeting of two wary souls, comforting each other.
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Your life path had been difficult. You do not have a family nor a place you could call "home". You consider yourself to be...
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A herb mistress has a fateful encounter with a stranger.
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03/30/17 01:32 am
I suppose they'd have a heart attack if I told them I'm writing fanfic in English these days. *g*
03/30/17 01:31 am
experience like you, Alpha, but with English: two English teachers told me I should try to get a job where I wouldn't need foreign languages as they judged me too little giftd in languages.
03/30/17 01:29 am
My father was a maths teacher, too, which wasn't always easy for me, *g* - my classmates considered it as uncool in a major way to be daugther of a maths teacher. And I made a similar
03/28/17 11:13 pm
Wow- Naledi- you were Maths!! I am an English teacher and so agree. I am so careful - don't always get it right but try to make sure every interaction is positive.
03/28/17 12:10 pm
I was a maths teacher too! A really soul-destroying job sometimes, because many children arrived at school already afraid of the subject.
03/28/17 12:08 pm
It is sad how a bad teacher can make a child's time at school a misery. When I was teaching I was very conscious that even the most casual, throwaway comment could wound.
Alpha Ori
03/28/17 01:08 am
Love to meet him today and tell him I studied astronomy. Twit.
Alpha Ori
03/28/17 01:07 am
I still remember my maths teacher. Pasty faced and smelled of onions. I was traumatised, especially when he told my parents the only thing I was good at was sports.
Spiced Wine
03/24/17 02:30 pm
Most of my teachers were lovely - there were just a couple that were not nice.
03/22/17 11:06 pm
I hate hearing about teachers who ruined a child's interest or confidence or curiosity- as a teacher myself, it actually hurts to think how someone has done that. It doesn't happen much now.
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Penname: cheekybeak [Contact]
Real name: Kirsty
Membership status: Member
Member since: November 03, 2014
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My Stories are arranged in Three Series. In Ages Past: Which deals with the story Erestor, Glorfindel, and Maglor in the First and Second Age Order of Reading: A Song for My Beloved The Maedhros Incident Because He Killed Fingon Stranger from a Strange Land And The Walls of Glass Series. Funny ones first.... Legolas, Elrohir, Elladan, and Glorfindel with a little bit of Erestor, in the Third and Fourth Ages Trichomania Culture Shock Deep and Meaningful The Last Time Bitter Loving The Coronation Then the Walls of Glass Series, (sad serious angsty ones!) Walls of Glass Walk Beside Me That Wondrous Song The Ties that Bind Us. All three Series are interconnected but it is not necessary to read the earlier one to enjoy the second or third. The Other Side of the Sea Is a stand alone Legolas/Elrohir story written in different universe. Finally Darkness series which is non slash mainly Three Hunters. Both during the quest and afterwards.

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Title: Dark Prince ~ The Darkness Has Its Own Light. by Spiced Wine
Rated: Mature [Reviews - 197]
~ Lúthien was not the only offspring of Maia and Elf born in the Elder Days, but Vanimórë's tale was never to be sung in glittering halls.

His mother was Elven.
His father was Sauron.
His birth was accomplished by the blackest sorcery of Morgoth Bauglir.
He was forged as a double-edged sword is forged, as lethal and as beautiful.
And they tested him to breaking-point.

He would not break.

"Until the sky breaks and the mountains fall into the Great Sea, and the End cometh, there is no world for us." ~ Vanimórë Gorthaurion.

The first of the Dark Prince series, the story of Sauron's son, born to be a weapon, a warrior, and a servant of the Dark ~
First Age to the War of the Ring.

Category: Fiction
Characters: Gil-galad, Glorfindel, Legolas, Maglor, Melkor/Morgoth, Mouth of sauron, Nimrodel, OMC, Orc, Sauron
Content: Angst, AU, Character Death, Drama, Dubcon, Incest, Rape/Non-con, Slash
Challenge: None
Series: Dark Prince ~ The Darkness Has Its own Light.
Chapters: 73 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 148154 | Read count: 302828

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Published: June 30, 2011 | Updated: July 01, 2011

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 ~ I Dream His Life ~

Oh I loved this chapter! Think it was because if the F

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 ~ The Last Star Is Fallen ~

OMG ....what a beautiful death scene......I am crying....

Author's Response: I think it is worse in Magnifcat I - but thank you!

Reviewer: cheekybeak Signed
Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ I Reject The Valar ~

I can't believe they sent Gil-Galad to the void! I am so livid !!! so unfair!
Which Valar was this? Manw

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 ~ Tind

Ah! Here it is! Now I understand a bit more about Tindomion .

Author's Response: There is a lot more in Magnificat I, but in this I just wanted to put enough for people to basically know whom he was :) And thank-you again, for continuing to read and comment :) It is very much appreciated.

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 ~ A Candle In The Darkness ~

Oh, you are breaking my heart with Vanim

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 ~ Thou Must Run From Him. And Me ~

This was tragic....and cruel...to both of them. Heartrending.

I am loving this story. It is very addictive, and I have to say how much I am loving Vanim

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ Silent Guardian ~

He saw himself for what he was. Elgalad saw a lie.

I think Vanim

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Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 ~ No Haven From Hate ~

Oh no! I am hating on Malthador at the moment. But also......you know, Legolas should have picked this treatment of Elgalad up before now. I guess he didn't imagine it possible but I still think he should have done more investigating.

Will Tindomion work this one out? Will they get Elgalad back before he gets himself into serious trouble??
Shame on you Legolas! You should have paid more attention?

Author's Response: I think the thing about Elgalad was that he was lovely, and very loving, but he was very reserved about himself - it was part of hiding that Vanim

Reviewer: cheekybeak Signed
Date: February 06, 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 ~ Hallowed Ground ~

Legolas and Glorfindel??!

Somehow I think I should have picked that one up before now but it slipped past me!

Author's Response: Really that story would come into the one I plan to write about Elgalad's life in the forest, as he was there a long time, but as this isn't 'their' story, it's not gone into much.

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Date: February 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 ~ The Edge Of Doom ~

What happened with Glorfindel and Vanim

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Date: February 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ~ I Will Not Break ~

This is riveting. I am really enjoying it so far. Just wanted to tell you that. I am curious why, given his parentage and the deprivation if his childhood Vanim

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Date: February 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 ~ Tempering The Steel

Why does Vanim

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Date: February 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ Son, Or Slave ~

I thought all along that Sauron might have had more success with Vanim

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Date: February 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 ~ Hope Under The Shadow ~

Loved the scene with Legolas and the Mumakil...loved it!!!

Oh you are teasing me with this Glorfindel and Vanim

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Date: February 10, 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73 ~ The Beginning ~

So Glorfindel is a Vala.....bonus for Legolas!!

I read the last few chapters of this very quickly because they were SO thrilling. This ending left me surprised . I didn't see anything like this coming.
I think Vanim

Title: ~ I Will Lead And Thou Shalt Follow ~ by Spiced Wine
Rated: Mature [Reviews - 16]

~ It was said that Fëanor had little love for his half-brothers, yet Fingolfin followed him to betrayal and, ultimately, to death in single combat against Morgoth.

There were many lies handed down through the ages, and this lie covered something so forbidden and irresistible that no law could forbid it, neither could death or doom destroy it.

The Arc of Fire, the blazing thread connecting the houses of Fëanor and Fingolfin encompassed three generations and thousands of years. It began in Valinor, in the Years of the Trees.

This is a prologue to Lords Of The Light, and set within the Dark Prince verse.

Fëanaro's aura was hard and as brilliant as forge-heated gems.

“And wilt thou indeed follow me?” he whispered.


Category: Fiction
Characters: Fëanor, Fingolfin, Glorfindel, Maglor
Content: AU, Drama, Dubcon, Erotica, Explicit Sex, Incest, Slash
Challenge: None
Series: Magnificat Of The Damned
Chapters: 4 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 13469 | Read count: 30685

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Published: July 01, 2011 | Updated: July 01, 2011

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Date: February 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ A Flame Too Bright ~

I have embarked upon your stories. I was unsure where to start so picked this one because you said. Chronologically it was first but also Encairion has me longing for more Feanor and Fingolfin and oh, this didn't disappoint! So Hot. They are an irresistible combination.

I see I will have to get to grips with all their alternative names. Because I have only just read the Silm and not many Silmarillion stories I really only know the Sindarin names and not all the others so sometimes keeping track of who was who was challenging!

I loved all of this. It has hooked me in already . I especially like the description of a sleeping F

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Date: February 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ The Imprint Of Power ~

I was going to comment about Anair

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Date: February 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ~ A Jealous Burning ~

I am conflicted! I can't work F

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Date: February 02, 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 ~ Follow Me! ~

Ah, I feel sad knowing time is already running out for these two.


Title: ~ Magnificat of the Damned. Book II. Resurrection ~ by Spiced Wine
Rated: Mature [Reviews - 86]

At the end of the Third Age, Glorfindel and Vanimórë, son of Sauron, are the supreme Powers on Arda, having passed through Fos Almir, the Bath of Flame.

The mighty dead have returned, and Glorfindel leads the Noldor to a haven in the east of Middle-earth, which they call their New Cuiviénen. Fëanor, released from the Void, will rule there as High King.

But the ancient loves, hates and feuds of the Noldor have not dimmed or been forgotten with the ages, and their new life becomes a tinder-box of passion, pride and power. Ancient dooms and betrayals arise, and both new and ancient notes of the Great Music are played across the Fourth Age of Arda.

Category: Fiction
Characters: Aredhel, Balrog, Beleg, Caranthir, Celegorm, Daeron, Ecthelion, Eluréd, Elurín, Erestor, Fingolfin, Fingon, Finrod, Gil-galad, Glorfindel, Ingwë, Legolas, Maedhros, Maeglin, Maglor, Mandos/Námo, Manwë, Mouth of sauron, OFC, OMC, Orodreth, Oromë, Penlod, Túrin
Content: Angst, AU, Drama, Dubcon, Erotica, Explicit Sex, Incest, Kink, Rape/Non-con, Slash
Challenge: None
Series: Magnificat Of The Damned
Chapters: 58 | Completed: Yes | Word count: 236033 | Read count: 165983

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Published: July 01, 2011 | Updated: July 01, 2011

Reviewer: cheekybeak Signed
Date: April 09, 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ~ A Tapestry of Tears ~

I love Beleg. He is a favourite of mine and it seems so perfect that he is connected to Legolas!

Author's Response: I really like Beleg, too :) And I couldn't resist making him Legolas' ancestor :)

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Date: April 08, 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 ~ How would it feel to lose him? ~

Oh! You surprised me with this. I did not see it coming. Celegorm and Finrod! But it makes perfect sense of Celegorm's actions, that bitter hate borne of rejection, nothing cuts deeper.

I REALLY want Finrod to Come back now. I did already but now even more so. But Celegorm hasn't forgiven him for......? Well, I don't think Finrod did that much wrong really. If anyone should understand not breaking an oath it should be Celegorm, and the fact Finrod was determined to sacrifice his own happiness so as not to hurt his father, again Celegorm should understand that. It was misguided but if anyone knows about misguidedly doing what your father wants it should be a Feanorian!

I want these two together and I think Finrod is ready to accept that side of himself now, but he is not ready to forgive Celegorm and Celegorm doesn't seem like he is ready to acknowledge the wrongness of what he did at all.
I am eager to see what happens. It will be rather a shock for Glorfindel who has his own Celegorm issues as well.

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting, Cheekybeak - well, since it is already written, I think you will not be too disappointed in what happens :)

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Date: April 13, 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ The Love of a Kinslayer ~

Oh! You have me feeling so so sorry for Celegorm.......and I was not expecting that, I really wasn't. What great writing, you have completely swayed me. More convinced than ever these two have to get together!!

Author's Response: Ah, I love it when that happens - when my own passion shows in my writing, I mean :) Thank you so much for your comment! It is coming together - sort of!

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Date: April 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 ~ To The Fires Of The Year's End ~

Oh I have a bad feeling about this. The Balrog AND Celegorm going off hunting on his own in the north..... the fool!!

Reviewer: cheekybeak Signed
Date: April 14, 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 ~ Winter's Vengeance ~

Aargh!!! I was right! ....... Finrod will save him.... Surely!
And I have to go and cook tea so I can't read any further. So cruel.
And why isn't Glorfindel answering?? Hopefully just temporarily distracted.

Author's Response: Glorfindel is momentarily distracted!

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Date: April 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 ~ The Treachery of Kin ~

OMG! Orodreth!? I had no inkling of this. You totally succeeded in distracting me with Borniven. I had forgotten Orodreth was even around let alone a traitor!

I like that Feanor has had his eyes opened here. His horror at the thought Maglor......and Maedhros still believe the silmaril to be more important to him than them. Who can blame them after the oath and everything that followed after.

I don't like Feanor. I am not sure if you want me to or not but he is too arrogant for me to like. His enjoyment at controlling others....
Perhaps this realisation of how his sons see him may improve that. Here's hoping because I would like to see him with Fingolfin properly but not quite as the person he is right now.

But then again..... I find I am quite liking the idea of Fingolfin and Maglor. Maglor needs someone. He has no one right now, Feanor just can't be his and Vanim