This was hilarious, such a ingenious plot!! Gave me quite a laugh when i read about the kiss, such great stories are hard to come by, both funny and serious and filled With emotions. Great work!!
Oh, it's always lovely to get a new reader. Yes, the twins certainly got one over on Thranduil. Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it! Much appreciated!
'Then, oh gods, he felt it coming. The blackness. Cold scales. Gathering and slithering, it coiled about him. A series of rapid images, kneeling by his brother's rent body as the forest burned about them, his face wet with tears. Elrohir felt himself curling into a ball. He heard his own voice screaming. It wasn't fair. Why did they do this to themselves? Why couldn't they quit this obsession for all time?
He sank into a black grief and remained there for what seemed an age.'
I keep reading this over and over again. You're the only one who can write them like this, it all makes sense when you explain it like this.
Thank you so much, Riraito! I appreciate your comment.
I was surprised that this was the end, to be honest - but then, actually, I think you are right. However, if you ever want to tell us the tale of their dragon hunt, I will enjoy reading it!
Good to know you'd like more of this tale. I had actually mapped out scenes from the sequel in my head but never got around to writing it. I doubt I will now, but there are references to what happened in my story Secret Heart, which maybe at some point I'll get around to posting here. Cheers!
Oh my - poor Thranduil... :)
I am left wondering who was more surprised by this incredibly savage and erotic encounter, the twins, or Thranduil.
Although the Dwarf kiss was just pure mischief! :)
Well, the twins certainly turned the tables on dear old Thranduil. Thanks for reading my dear.
Quick! Quick! In the wardrobe!
Not the best place to hide but will do in a pinch.
These last chapters were superbly erotic, Elfscribe, and made all the deeper by the way you write the connection between the twins and Legolas. I find incestuous relationships so superb when done well, and when it results in a threesome - not many authors can manage that, but it really is something else.
I had to laugh at the twins trying their wiles on Thranduil. I wonder if he will succumb? I would not blame him. They are ravishing :)
So pleased you're continuing to enjoy it, Sian. Right, I think the twins would be hard to resist. In this case, I think clever Thranduil is getting more than he bargained for. Thanks for your comments.
Wow, this is so sensuous, Elfscribe. It's exquisitely hot, but not that alone; the relationship of the twins make this wonderfully deep and erotic. I adore well-written threesomes and moresomes and this is beautifully written!
Thank you Sian. I'm pleased you're enjoying it.
There was a stir at the hall entrance.
All the court turned their heads as several guards marched in. They were escorting two tall, dark-haired elves who had their hands tied behind them.
Interested, Legolas sat up to get a better look as the guards brought them close. His heart leapt at the sight. They were mirror images of one another, and oh, so beautiful: long silky dark hair, high cheek bones, shapely lips. They each wore a small diamond stud in one ear that caught the light as they moved, one wore it in the right ear, the other in the left. But it was the light within their large wolf-like grey eyes that most captivated the prince.
They had clearly been through some sort of misfortune. Their clothes were stained and wrinkled, their hair disheveled. One wore a surcoat and mailshirt over a long tunic, but the other was wearing only leggings and boots and a cloak that, when he moved, revealed flashes of white skin beneath. Legolas found himself holding his breath waiting for the next glimpse of that lithe body.
Their "grand" entrance makes me breathless, too. Every time. This is one of my old-time favourite stories, read again and again. It's also the first E+E I came across and the first threesome. I'm glad you've given me the perfect excuse to read it again! :o)
Seriously, this story is so enjoyable in so many ways: erotic, exciting and funny (Náin and Thranduil are just a hoot). Even before the twins get started, I love the initial scene with Legolas and Táro, and I was sorry he was sent away. You sure write the sexiest elves ever.
Thank you so much my dear. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it enough to give it another reading. Hugs!
**Let me be corrupted.**
Oh I really don't think he will have to try that hard...
I imagine you're right. Thanks CW.
I should have resisted. I should have, Elladan thought, as guilt seized him. I can't bear to cause him pain. Amidst echoes of black despair, he got up, pulled the covers over his twin, blew out the lantern, and then slid next to him, throwing an arm over his chest and drawing him near, listening as their heartbeats became one.
I love this; it gives such pathos to their love, and I do think it would be so. Amid the wonderfully erotic sex and sense of beauty, there is this sadness.
Such beauty, Legolas sighed to himself. Let me be corrupted.
I imagine he will be :)
Thanks Sian. I really appreciate your comments.
The sexual tension and sheer dynamics between the twins is so smoking, and so realistic, Elfscribe! Phew! They seem to be eying Legolas as an extremely tasty morsel - and he is. Truly wicked :)
I love the idea of their connection, feeling one another through a third person; that is a wonderful idea, and I can believe it with these two!
I'm glad you are buying the twins' mental connection, Sian. Makes for a logical reason for the threesome. LOL. And good to hear that you found the twins smokin'. I think Legolas does too.
Over 1,000 years, and the king was as volatile, brilliant, and indeed, fascinating as ever.
You definitely make Thranduil all those things, and we've hardly even met him. That's a real writer's talent, Elfscribe, the way you colour your characters so brilliantly in a short space, so they are absolutely real. Thranduil really does seem erratic in his welcoming the twins, reminding them that he remembers them, but then speaking of a closer alliance - erratic, but definitely a king.
Nain with Thranduil-admiration, and Legolas' amusement :D
I am so enjoying this :)
I'm pleased you're enjoying this, Sian. This was a fun one to write.
uh oh, liked the "lessons" very much. What a waste in sending Taro away but replacement is arriving with El+El. Thank you so much for a hot chapter. Lai
You have it figured out. lol. Yes I suspect Legolas might find an even larger challenge when he meets the twins. You're welcome. Thanks for the comment.
Thranduil is right, of course - that sort of relationship between master and pupil is never a good thing for it is an abuse of trust. But it probably doesn't feel like that to Legolas right now. I wonder if T
Now that was hot slash. T
I read this opening chapter whilst away from home, and had to come back to say how much I am looking forward to more! I feel sorry for them feeling so guilty about their relationship when to them it seems so normal until others try to make them feel it is unnatural.
I particularly liked the scene in the inn.
Thanks you for coming back to make a comment. My twins definitely feel guilty about their relationship. It makes for all that angsty drama you know. I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
I read this story ages ago, in fact I think it was one of the first slash stories I dared to read.
I love the beginning, it evokes a wonderful image of the swaggering, swashbuckling sons of Elrond, of fast wit and mischief - oh the havoc they will wreak in Mirkwood!!
I'm happy you're enjoying a second read. This beginning was really fun to write.
Elfscribe, this was a wonderful beginning. These two; you write the connection and heat and desire between them so well; they match so beautifully.
The scene in the bar was brilliant - and now I see why they end up in Mirkwood! I am looking forward to more!
Glad you're enjoying it Sian. These are going back to my fanfic roots. LOL. I haven't visited these two in a long time and I'm finding I'm enjoying them again. Thanks for the comment. Hugs.