I was singing the song in my head the whole way through this chapter, just from reading the title. LOL Can't wait for the next book!
Haha, I know, I kept singing it the whole time I was writing after I thought of including it.
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TEARS are falling down my cheeks at the ending of this and looking forward to the 3rd book!! This chapter was ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFLLY DONE!! INTENSE at times and EMOTIONAL!! I LOVED the scenes with Legolas and Lane. Also between Lane and Erkenbrand--PRICELESS!!
A BEAUTIFUL, EXCITING AND EXCELLENT STORIES you have written--PERFECTION!!
WOW, I'm absolutely touched by your review! Thank you so much!
Thank you thank you thank you!
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Really happy to see this updated and can't wait for more. Welcome back!!
Thanks so much for sticking with me! And I've finally got the new chapter out!
Las--It may not have had the action scenes BUT it was PERFECT, HEART-WARMING and SWEET! I LOVED it!! It is nice to see Lane somewhat feminine in a sense--it makes her REAL and BELIEVABLE to me!! I THINK you did an ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL JOB with this chapter and like usual I will be watching for more updates--EXCELLENT writing!!
I'm SO glad you liked it. It was acutally hard to write because I was afraid it was getting to warm and gooey, and you know -- girly! lol
Anyway, I am glad it was showing her femine side, I was hoping it would without going overboard.
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Or, maybe Lane got pulled through to Middle Earth before the movies came out?
I think it's fantastic how you're able to create tension and uncertainty in a story we all know and love. I read this chapter more or less knowing where it would go, but still, it was no less gripping to read. Well done. Again.
I'm glad to hear I was able to create some tension. You're right, it is hard to do with a story we all know and love so well.
Sorry for the long delay, but I've finally got the next chapter out! Go check it out!
COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY AWESOME chapter!!
I loved it and am glad Legolas was back (knew so-so he wouldn't have died) but I loved Gimli's help of Lane and especially Lane with Garwine. They were greatly written and my heart soared. I hope all plays out well between Legolas and Lane!! BRILLIANTLY done!!
Thanks so much for the kind words. Sorry it took me so long, but I'm finally back with the next chapter.
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Well, I did not see THAT chapter end coming! Poor Lane. Poor Legolas. And I just have to throw in a poor Eowyn because she's always been my favorite and I know it works out in the end for her, but she's got such a crappy road to travel to get there.
I continue to be mildly amazed at how much I'm loving this story (and by that, I include "To Protect" as well), but I think that's a testament to how well you've written it.
I know, I always felt bad for Eowyn and her poor girlish crush. It's hard for a girl to have her heart broken by her first crush.
Thanks so much for the reviews, and I'm glad I'm managing to hold people's interest. Believe me, I continue to be amazed just by that, lol.
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OMG!! Damn sitting on edge of seat unable to breathe. This was exciting and wonderful!! will be waiting for more!!
Well, you can scoot back and read the next chapter now!
Lol, thanks so much for the reviews!
I LOVED IT!! I especially loved how Lane saw Namo--I adore James Earl Jones and his voice!! I thoroughly enjoyed her and the hobbits time with the orcs. Everything was written absolutely perfectly. I am so glad to see another post for this story. It is definately entertaining and exciting...EXCELLENT writing!!
Lol, I'm glad you liked James Earl Jones, he just struck me right for the role for some reason.
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Well, this story is off to a great start! LOVED reading Namo's (sorry - too lazy to look up the character map to do accent marks) words in James Earl Jones' voice! An interesting choice by Lane's subconscious to be sure. Looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds.
I know, I hate trying to get the accents to work. I've got my word processor set up to automatically change them for me.
And I'm glad you liked James Earl Jones, he just struck me right for the role for some reason.
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