Reviews For Hunter of the Heart
Name: Quantumphysica (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2013 15:00 · For: Chapter 1
Awww... In just one chapter you perfectly captured their emotions and falling in love, and you crowned it with a bit of delightful smut ;) Loved reading this!
Name: Mindirith (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 4:19 · For: Chapter 1
What a lovely story! I like how Rumil's nervous habit has a completely different reason then first anticipated. And I love how Glorfindel and Rumil's relationship managed to develop, pretty much without anyone else being aware. Too bad you didn't describe the reaction of his fellow trainees to his changed attitude and aptitude. I am a little curious about that... :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words Mindirith, they are appreciated. I figure Imladris had a lot of places one could sneak away for romantic interludes. That's how I like to picture it anyway. I kind of hinted at Rumil surprising the other trainees with his new skill but the fact is, Rumil had learned to hide his problem so well there wasn't much change in his personality, from his friends' point of view, other than that he was happier.
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