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Ysilme
10/19/17 01:18 pm
with all my lovely elves created there. *g* But it looks as I really should give it a go soon, and keep a lookout for the new one. :)
Ysilme
10/19/17 01:18 pm
Interesting news about the new game. I've bought Shadow of Mordor some time ago, but never really played it so far; I'm not playing often and when I do, I'm still stuck at Skyrim
Ysilme
10/19/17 01:17 pm
Belated Happy Birthday, Cheekybeak!
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10/18/17 01:11 am
Happy Birthday Cheekybeak- hope you liked your gift:)
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10/16/17 07:36 pm
Belated happy birthday, cheeky!
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10/16/17 02:30 pm
Belated happy birthday, Cheeky! I'm glad you had a good day :)
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10/16/17 09:54 am
Thanks Alquien. I had a great day!
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10/15/17 08:09 pm
Happy Birthday, cheeky! Best wishes! I hope you enjoy your special day! :)
Spiced Wine
10/15/17 01:28 pm
Has probably learned all about the Silmarillion and Appendices of LOTR from paying these games :D
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10/15/17 01:27 pm
Fanfic is fanfic is fanfic,, Narya :) I'd really like to read it actually. Kev is absorbed; what with me filling in the background, he
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Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2012 23:18 · For: Chapter 1

Ah- lovely. But why ask Elladan to leave....sorry. It'slate. Glasses of wine later and an over wrought imagination.



Author's Response:

lololol! Your comment made my day! Now this makes me question Elladan's motives in The Binding Gift (the sequel to this). Maybe he was deliberately listening in?



Name: Tinara (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 18:28 · For: Chapter 1
Such a romantic notion, to feel that there's some connection missing and to follow this to one's mate. I'm sure Elladan will yield the tent, I'm sure he needs some time to come to terms with his brother's sudden declaration!
I have the feeling you confused the point of view a bit after the change in the middle "Legolas plucked up his courage and drew a deep breath.

“Bind with me!”

Legolas gasped, unable to believe his ears. “What did you say?”"
It can't be Legolas in both cases, one has to be Elrohir, I think.
Tinara

Author's Response:

Thanks! Yes, I'm sure Elrohir and Legolas would have ended up together in other circumstances, but the fact that they were on the eve of a huge battle just hastened things along a bit.

I was playing around with POV switches in this fic and that section is a bit confusing. Basically, Legolas is just plucking up his nerve to propose when Elrohir gets in first. I should have worked at making it clearer, but I'm always too impatient to post! I hope it didn't spoil the fic for you.

Thanks for reviewing :)



Name: Tinara (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 18:28 · For: Chapter 1
Such a romantic notion, to feel that there's some connection missing and to follow this to one's mate. I'm sure Elladan will yield the tent, I'm sure he needs some time to come to terms with his brother's sudden declaration!
I have the feeling you confused the point of view a bit after the change in the middle "Legolas plucked up his courage and drew a deep breath.

“Bind with me!”

Legolas gasped, unable to believe his ears. “What did you say?”"
It can't be Legolas in both cases, one has to be Elrohir, I think.
Tinara


Name: Tamid Levad (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 23:56 · For: Chapter 1
So very beautiful and romantic :) Brilliant image of Elladan just sitting in the tent, mouth open, gazing at where his brother just vanished xD. Likewise, I can hear Gimli's discontented (but goodnatured) grumbling about having to share with Elladan!

Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, poor Elladan must have been left feeling pretty confused! As for how Gimli and Elladan spend the night - well all will be revealed in the next fic.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing :)



Name: Mindirith (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 22:48 · For: Chapter 1
Another great story! I love how you switched characters half way down, and don't clue us in until several paragraphs later!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Yes, I was playing around with POV in this tale. Hope it didn't confuse you too much!

Thanks for reviewing :)



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