Oh Lumeriel this is a joy to read! I am loving it. I love the background of the mines. Of course the Noldor dug! And I love the beast. I can't wait for the reveal!
What a cliffhanger! FIngolfin fallen too! On to the next chapter!
Author's Response: what would the Noldor be without mines to extract their precious gems? Happy that you are enjoying the story. Haha! Fingolfin usually gets into trouble. At least in this story.
Really enjoying this fic so much! :) Anything with Fingolfin is amazing!
Author's Response: Welcome to my world: anything with Fingolfin is LIVE. Thank You.
Aww, bless, Fingolfin’s still so adorable ‘I know where you live’, but so is the Beast in this :D
Author's Response: Fingolfin will come back. For revenge XD
I am enjoying this relationship between the 'Beast' (clearly NOT) and Nolofinwe. Looking forward to the moment he realises who the beast really is and fidning out what happened to him.
Author's Response: Mhm ... when Nolofinwë discovers the whole truth ... I think it will be a great mess.
Nice to see new writers posting here, Lumeriel. Hope you find it friendly and encouraging.
I like this original odea- looking forward to see where you go with it!
Author's Response: Glad to have a chance here, ziggy. This is one of my favorite sites and one of the first where I found great stories. Let's see together where this idea leads :)
This is SO charming, while Fingolfin is still quite young, and trying to (sort of) make friends instead of being eaten. He’s so adorable :D
Author's Response: At this point in the story, Fingolfin still fears to be eaten from one moment to another XD
I think I know who the beast is!!!! But I still want to read it. Nice job so far.
Author's Response: Good for you! XD. Nolofinwë doesn't know. Not yet. Thank you.
It’s lovely, it’s honestly unlike anything I’ve read before. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
Thank you do much for posting this here! I am enjoying this story so much; it’s mysterious and also enchanting and a little dark (as well as erotic) like all fairy tales should be :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Take it as a gift for you: after all, you are one of the main reasons why I dared to publish in the fandom. Little by little, I will be updating this story here and in Ao3; but maybe here I have time to review better. My first fairy tale :)