"yodel rhymed with Nimrodel", I laughed out loud at this line! Poor Nimrodel. I also really liked the description of Erestor, with the sharp feature, and lips smacking. A very fun little piece.
This is great fun!
I doubt that he will ever finish that sonnet, but it looks as if he's getting what he wanted anyway!
I am so pleased you enjoyed this- Legolas just can't help himself and nor can Erestor!Thank you.
Oh so fun. Poor Legolas, just be you! Erestor knows whats good, lol!
Glad you enjoyed this little bit of nonsense! x
Oh Ziggy I love it! Poor Legolas struggling with his sonnet! The boy is at ease with bawdy lyrics but this attempt at cultured seduction is beyond him!
And then his over eager greeting!
And Erestor’s sensual response. Ooh he’s something, isn’t he?
What a fun little fic!
Glad you enjoyed this my dear Nelya:)
Awww, this is so sweet! I love how Legolas struggles in vain with rhymes, except for those bawdy ones... *ggg*
Glad you liked it. Thank you Ysilme.
Wonderful! Poor Legolas, struggling to hard to find the right words when all he needed was a simple look. Something tells me Erestor would have taken matters into his own hands if Legolas hadn't approached him. He strikes me more as a seducer than a seducee :)
You have it absoluteky, naledi. Just a snippet that's been floating round on my laptop and needed finishing. Thank you for commenting:)