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Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 22:22 · For: Chapter 1 ~ Out of Dust and Ashes ~

I am terrible sorry for Anairë myself, yes. The Vanya's and especially Ingwë and Anairë are kind of 'soaked' in the Valar's emanations. I do think that it might lessen, but it won't be some kind of fairytale awakening

Poor I wasn't even thinking of what would happen to her once the whole "drug effects" wore off. If she is unhappy now then it's bound to be absolutly terrible for her.

 

Thank you so much. Having read some stories recently where there is a lot of smutty porn, I realised I couldn't bear it, it just did nothing for me, so it's good to know it's not vulgar.

Well if you ever worried about that, you do not need to. It's not pointless smut for the smut, there is a real connection between those two characters, passion and love, and this very passion sounds so precious and valuable. Fire, really, and they sound perfect for each others, in bodies and mind, passionate and tender and I have no words really. What happens between them is something they want to fight for, it's not just "icing on the cake and here take some fanservice". It has a purpose, really.

And now I'm rambling.

 

Thank you so much, Kalendeer and hope your own writing is going well :)

Well your beautiful chapters certainly put me in a much better mood!



Author's Response:

Well, I hope that her withdrawal won't ultimately be ghastly, because as is mentioned, she was born in Middle-earth and wasn't always like this, but the Valar are good at brainwashing, so it won't be easy either. 

Thank you; I would rather write about the 'connection' between characters than the mechanics of banging, lol. 

 

Oh, that's nice to know, I'm glad it put you in a good mood :) Thank you again 



Author's Response:

Well, I hope that her withdrawal won't ultimately be ghastly, because as is mentioned, she was born in Middle-earth and wasn't always like this, but the Valar are good at brainwashing, so it won't be easy either. 

Thank you; I would rather write about the 'connection' between characters than the mechanics of banging, lol. 

 

Oh, that's nice to know, I'm glad it put you in a good mood :) Thank you again 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 21:12 · For: Chapter 11 ~ The Matter of Fingolfin ~

Hmmmmmmmmm what does "communing with Varda" means exactly, and does the poor girl do that of her own volition or because she has been completely brainwashed, I wonder.

I really pity them both. Fëanor and Nerdanel's situation was already horrible, but Fingolfin's marriage is just... I have no words.

 



Author's Response:

I am terrible sorry for Anairë myself, yes. The Vanya's and especially Ingwë and Anairë are kind of 'soaked' in the Valar's emanations. I do think that it might lessen, but it won't be some kind of fairytale awakening 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2020 20:51 · For: Chapter 10 ~ To Love and Learn ~

I feel like I am repeating myself but you write some HOT sex and that first scene was amazing. It's so vivid and yet never vulgar, and I LOVED that they switched positions (I don't think I remember Fëanor "bottoming", ever, in any other story I read from you so far). The chemistry between those two is just incredible.

I was planning to write only one chapter before I got back to writing, but I am really, really worried about what Finwë will do now that he knows, so I will go straight to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Having read some stories recently where there is a lot of smutty porn, I realised I couldn't bear it, it just did nothing for me, so it's good to know it's not vulgar.

 

Well, we see what Finwë did, although it wasn't him alone.

 

Thank you so much, Kalendeer and hope your own writing is going well :) 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2020 21:06 · For: Chapter 9 ~ Sour Notes and Sweet !

OH YES INGWE COMES TO SPEAK WITH HIM (sorry sorry sorry I am inarticulate again).

And then he was gone. Some part of me wishes Fëanor would grab him by the shoulders and shake him up, poor guy.

 

I think Vanimorë may need a break from godhood or at least a hug, he sounded very depressed in this chapter, though I guess that would happen to anyone who saw his world destroyed several times.



Author's Response:

Ingwë can't quite resist, lol. I'm sure Fëanor would like to grab in, but not where the Valar can see (or not yet!) 

 

Vanimöré is dreadfully depressed; during this time he's sometimes at the Monument, and sometimes on another Earth, but wherever, it makes no difference, as he can't run away from himself. And he can never, being what he is, ever take a 'break' sadly.

 

Thank you again for commenting :) 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2020 20:46 · For: Chapter 8 ~ The Mirror of Worlds ~

Of course Vanimorë would be the one to create a storm to allow them to start their love story, like the good lover/dad/all the things I missed he has been for them. It was nice seeing hm again and of course he's still one of the hottest being in the universe.

Fëanor learning to sail is an interesting development, now if he could also learn how to make boats, perhaps leaving Valinor may be less bloody than for his first incarnation!



Author's Response:

I think Fëanor honestly did mean to learn to sail so he could captain a ship, yes, but not in the way that it happened in the Silm. Here, he is one of Olwë's favourite people right now, as he faced his tower and made it beautiful, but clearly things don't continue like that. Which is a shame! 

 

Thank you :) 

 

Vanimöré will interfere so far and no further, even though he would wish to. He won't coddle people. 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2020 18:37 · For: Chapter 7 ~Stormlight ~

I like how this chapter began with Fëanor&Fingolin being mostly cute to them discovering time for cuteness is gone and now they are going to be a hot rebellious mess. I hope they don't get caught before they have means to escape the Valar, though I guess Vanimorë would probably do something to help them if that ever happened. And as always the sex was hot, and interesting because yep, m/m sex does not necessarily end with penetration.

Since I have reread I shall lead and you shall follow recently, I have a feeling you write Fëanor and Nerdanel differently. In the first one she was barely a thought and Fëanor sounded like he only wanted to use here, whereas in this fic they are not in love, but Fëanor respects her and seems to be fond of her. I wonder if you changed your mind about their relationship or if Fëanor changed after many incarnations?



Author's Response:

Thank you :) 

 

When I wrote 'I Will Lead' Fëanor already had his children and was Nerdanel was on the verge of leaving. I never really touched on anyone when they were younger. Now, of course I am, and while I don't see Fëanor loving her, I think he and she had a lot in common and if he had to marry (bearing in mind in my 'verse that was what happened in Valinor and anything beyond that or het relationships was seen as deviant) then Nerdanel was better than almost anyone. I think it was a 'working' marriage, in that they could get along, but not a love match. In Valinor I think there were very few of those (in the Valinor I write of anyhow). 

I doubt Fëanor changed at all, but I think in this universe he and Fingolfin got together fairly young and for a while at least, it managed to temper Fëanor's driving need to rebel, although that's bound to come in the future. Vanimöré won't interfere all that much. 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2020 22:02 · For: Chapter 5 ~ First Son (Steel and Fire) ~

"Thinks’t thou I would trot up to Ilmarin and seduce Ingwë?’

Fëanor! How canst thou even jest—‘

‘Who said it was a jest?’"

Well it's not too late for that (yes you really did make me ship Ingwë and Fëanor, HARD, in one paragraph).

And I am wondering if Indis is not a tad bit in love with Nerdanel. At least she and Fëanor are on friendly terms, that's a relief!



Author's Response:

Well it's not too late for that (yes you really did make me ship Ingwë and Fëanor, HARD, in one paragraph).

 

Lol. Yes, I have always had a  bit of a thing for that ship, at least later, when Ingwë was a bit more 'alive' ;) 

 

Yes, that's an interesting thought about Indis and Nerdanel. Indis certainly does care for her; I thought maybe because she thought Fëanor was too young, too inexperienced etc to look after her while pregnant, but maybe there is more (and actually, he's extremely caring) *thinks* Thank you so much for reading and commenting again :D 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2020 21:49 · For: Chapter 4 ~ Flowering Friendship, Desperate Measures ~

Oh yes Fëanor flirts with Ingwë!

Oh no sad scene with Indis and Fëanor, but I really liked your take on this and why Indis hates him. I don't think I ever encountered this version anywhere.

OH NO what horrible plot from Mahtan! At least Nerdanel wasn't complicit because that would have been absolutly horrible. And if Finwë somehow is behind this well, he deserves to be stepped on by Morgoth.



Author's Response:

Actually I owe this to Narya, this headcanon of Indis and Míriel being lovers, but I really liked it, and borrowed it (Narya knows). And in that context it does make sense that Indis would be at the least wary of Fëanor. Yes.

 

And no, Nerdanel was not involved in this plot at all. I think she honestly wanted to marry Fëanor (in this verse most women would have jumped at it) but she would never have been complicit in it, and Fëanor knows that. 

 

Fëanor, actually in the Magnificat 'verse, did find Ingwë desirable yes, apart from his being comompetely 'frozen' lol, but still couldn't resist  ;) 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2020 21:18 · For: Chapter 3 ~ Blossoming ~

"He could not explain his desire to create. If Finwë did not understand that it was like air to him, like food, there was no point in attempting it."

"The Noldor were skilled at building, but the Halls of Ilmarin defied everything Fëanor had learned of architecture. The height and slenderness of the towers would have been impossible without Power, while some of the decorative shapes twisted uncomfortably on the senses, as if they were trying to slither out of the present, into the past or future."

I really like the idea of a palace sustained by the power of the Valar (and the Thangorodrim being sustained by the power of Melkor as a mirror of this?)

 

"Fëanor felt himself growing hard, imagining what it would be like to see Ingwë undone by lust."

After the description your made of Ingwë I definitly want to see that!

 

Fëanor and Fingolfin are, as always, very cute together. I am intrigued by the "flashes" Fëanor gets, obviously memories of former life, and how those flashes will influence him since he will have a very incomplete pictures of things, but may still act on them.



Author's Response:

'I really like the idea of a palace sustained by the power of the Valar (and the Thangorodrim being sustained by the power of Melkor as a mirror of this?)'

 

Yes, I would definitely think so, and Utumno, before that. 

 

Yes, the flashes Fëanor gets can complicate things a little, unless he comes to the stage where he can 'mentally' sort them from the life he lives, but even then, they're bound to affect him.

 

Thank you for the comment :) 




Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2020 15:56 · For: Chapter 2 ~ Awakening ~

"I usually don't enjoy writing 'young' people so much and don't do a lot of it, but I enjoyed this."

Once thing that definitly shows in all your stories is how much you do enjoy writing your characters. They aren't shown from the eyes of someone who obviously loves, cherishes and almost worships them (in the very good sense of an artist worshiping the picture they are painting). I think this is why you write them with such intensity. That or you really manage to fool the reader!



Author's Response:

Yes, lol, there are definitely some characters I do adore writing :D I don't think there are any I worship, I prefer characters with some flaws, or even a lot of flaws, but some characters i find incredibly interesting, which is what matters to me :) 



Name: Kalendeer (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2020 14:40 · For: Chapter 2 ~ Awakening ~

Young Fëanor discovering (re-discovering?) the world! Young Fingolfin being cute and angsty and slightly suicidal (jumping from bookshelves?).

You write those two so beautifully, your descriptions of Fëanor are always spot on. Reading this just after "I will lead and thou shallt follow", this Fëanor sounds a lot more humane, of course younger but also more vulnerable and less prideful. I wonder if he will grow up to be the same character or not, and it would be interesting to discover how your perception of him changed over time!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Kalendeer :) 

 

I usually don't enjoy writing 'young' people so much and don't do a lot of it, but I enjoyed this. I think Fëanor is Fëanor is Fëanor, but I think subconsciously he (and the others) do remember their past, and perhaps this is making him be a little less full-on, at least in the early days. I think the 'original' (lol 100% Fëanor!) will gradually emerge, though. 



Name: Fadesintothewest (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2019 21:46 · For: Chapter 11 ~ The Matter of Fingolfin ~
Always what a pleasure to read your stories! Such lushness and descriptiveness. Your narrative oozes, sparks fly off the page, or computer screen, lol! And as always your . Feanor is fire and Fingolfin here is coming into his own. Looking forward to the next and next and next chapters.

Author's Response:

Aww, you are so very kind :) Thank you. I adore writing about these two as you know. 

 

 



Name: astorey_91 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2019 15:14 · For: Chapter 11 ~ The Matter of Fingolfin ~
This situation is so sad (for all parties involved). Also, I’ve always loved that whenever whenever Fëanor is in a scene, that he naturally draws all eyes to himself. He certainly is a bright flame :).

Author's Response:

Absolutely, I pity everyone except the Valar! 

 

Oh yes, the Flame Imperishable— he draws attention without any effort at all.

 

Thank you so much for commenting, Astorey :) 



Name: astorey_91 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2019 0:12 · For: Chapter 10 ~ To Love and Learn ~
And it cut off half of my comment again lol. My apologies again ^__^''. I really enjoyed this chapter so much! The moments with Feanor and Fingolfin are always so sensual

Author's Response:

Oh, sorry that happened! Thank you, I enjoyed writing this chapter so very much :) 



Name: astorey_91 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2019 20:23 · For: Chapter 9 ~ Sour Notes and Sweet !
This chapter was fantastic! The Fëanor/Fingolfin was wonderful (as always lol :) ) They really are playing a dengerous game, especially when Manwë can tel that something is up. (Apologies for this second comment, for some reason half of what I wrote didn’t post lol)

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you. Well, we know it’s about to go pear shaped any minute and exactly because they’re being watched, lol. 



Name: Nuredhel (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2019 20:08 · For: Chapter 7 ~Stormlight ~

This was a truly magnificent chapter, the final scene was both intense and hot and also very explaining in a manner, it shows how the two of them are connected on some deep deep level, beyond what others may be able to fathom and understand. The small glimpse into the existence of Edenel was a nice touch, as was the fact that Indis did mention that Feanor indeed is gifted, and that she did love Miriel. The fact that the mere presence of the valar sort of captures the very soul in a state of almost trance is interesting, one can wonder if it is a conscious thing or something which is just a part of their nature. I do not doubt that they use it for all it is worth though. This story is really interesting and it really does captivate the reader, as always extremely well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Nuredhel :) 

Yes, these two are s very connected, nothing can ever really come between then, no one and certainly no Valar, although as we’ll see, they will try. 

I think the Valar’s influence is ‘them’ or rather the thoughts and tones of their minds that are exuded like a king of cloying gas that affects people. 

 

Again,thank you so much for your kind words :) 



Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2019 9:45 · For: Chapter 6 ~ Fire and Music, Starlight and Secrets ~

Another gorgeously written chapter with the most luscious description of both place and character. The image of Alqualonde with its newly covered towers of melted pearl, with opal is absolutely breathtaking. The thought gone into the creation of this, Spiced, is so compelling in term of world-building, completely credible and so easily imagined -effortless reading. I love the idea of cold forges and spell forges, the complex that Formenos is becoming. And you are taking your time with Fingolfin, and all the characters- gradually revealed and on stage. Such a joy reading this. (from Ao3)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for posting this here, too, Ziggy :) and I’m glad to spend a more leisurely time with these characters before everything hits the fan; it’s such a treat to write. 



Name: Narya (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2019 18:23 · For: Chapter 5 ~ First Son (Steel and Fire) ~
Oh, poor Fingolfin, this is so sad! I hope he can find a way to visit his brother.

I love that Fëanor is so concerned for Nerdanel even though they aren't in love - and ósanwe lessons from Rumil! Brilliant.

The scenes with baby Maedhros are so touching. You can *feel* the weight of Fëanor's love for him, and the scene at the end, refusing the blessing of the Valar - phew.

Another brilliant chapter :D I am so enjoying this!

Author's Response:

I should think if there’s any way Fingolfin can get to visit Formenos, he will. Especially as he gets older. And now, with learning Ósanwe, the brothers have a greater connection still — and more secret. 

Fëanor does like Nerdanel, and does care for her; he’s the antithesis of cold-blooded, I think, and quite good at looking after people, and they do have a lot in common with their artistic pursuits, but — a lot of us have probably been there. You can like someone a lot and just not fancy them, ever. It happens.

I headcanon that Fëanor put a lot into his children as they were in Nerdanel’s womb, and adored them from the beginning. But yes, neither he, or she want the Valar ‘upsetting’ their boy(s). And although Fëanor did mean to say that he was not doing this again, (which he did)  baby Maedhros actually provided a better excuse by screaming his lungs out, which Fëanor didn’t expect, but will make him think more deeply about the ‘wrongness’.

:) I’m so glad you liked it! 



Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 8:54 · For: Chapter 4 ~ Flowering Friendship, Desperate Measures ~

Loving this! Ingwe's blush- Feanor's wicked seductions!

 

‘I want to go there,’ he confided earnestly. ‘Fëanor, let us go, when we are older! The Teleri can sail us there in their swan ships.’ He curled one arm through Fëanor’s. ‘It would be the most splendid adventure. And we could be free!’ 

 

‘Yes,’ Fëanor said slowly. We could be free. We will never be free, here. ‘I want to go there, too.’ 

 

‘Wait for me to grow up!’ Fingolfin clutched his arm. ‘Promise me! Do not go without me.’ 

 

‘Yes, Fingolfin.’ He smiled. ‘I will wait.’ 

Lovely bit of irony - but I don't know what you are going to do in this fic...
The confrontation between Indis and Feanor is really well done and my sympathy  was so with Indis- how hard to have to see Feanor every day! And I like the way you chsnged things to account for Nerdanel.
Great story, Spiced- I have a theory about the mysterious person but not saying yet:)

Author's Response:

Thank you, Ziggy. I doubt this is going to be all that different to the Silmarillion to be honest; it wouldn’t be the same if it was the Silm is what it is because it’s grand tragedy and I don’t want to take that away from it; it would be like puncturing a balloon and still expecting it to be the same ????‍♀️ but some things will be altered. 



Name: Nuredhel (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2019 20:58 · For: Chapter 4 ~ Flowering Friendship, Desperate Measures ~

Great chapter, and i really like the way you portray the valar, they are like wax dolls with a core made from poison. That somebody did drug Fëanor in order to get him to bed Nerdanel is beliveable as well, it is rather devious and it could be a trick of the valar to subdue him, but as we know, it won't work. A creature which has no idea of what passion or love is cannot truly understand it, no matter what they do. Such fire cannot be reined inn and even if they believe they can control her they have made a blunder. I really love this story, i am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

I actually don’t think the Valar drugged Fëanor and Nerdanel (although they probably nudged toward it) It was Finwë and Mahtan colluding. But yes, they’ll never tame what Fëanor is! 

 

Thank you so much, Nuredhel :) 



Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2019 15:45 · For: Chapter 3 ~ Blossoming ~

I love this chapter so much! The wink!!!

I love the explanation for the trees- it is such a silly idea! This is much better. I have in my headcanon that the trees is just a daft story, like Adam and Eve, a way of explaining the Valar's bounty and apparent generosity. This is much better! I really enjoyed the description of the Valar's halls being impossible and a bit wrong, an illusion- it makes them slightly horrifying . Great writing.

I love the ring for Ingwe, he's going to be really really surprised!!

 

(Fingolfin had been seated the other side of Míriel and Fëanor had not taken much notice, surely the boy had been calmer, even asleep?  - did you mean Indis?)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Ziggy, I was actually thinking a bit of R’leyh when I was writing about Ilmarin and the gardens, not quite as maddening, but something a bit ‘off’ about them. 

 

The wink, yes, incorrigible Fëanor, lol.

 

Ooops yes, I did. Fixed~! Thank you :) 



Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2019 15:17 · For: Chapter 2 ~ Awakening ~

This is a lovely chapter between the two brothers, their emerging love, their seeking adventure and freedom. I like the young Feanor and his fierce protectiveness, his complicated adolescent relationship with Finwe. And the book! Wonderful moment!!



Author's Response:

I think if Fëanor could, at that point have run away to Endor with Fingolfin, he would have. Sadly that was not to be ;__; 

 

Thank you, Ziggy :) 



Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2019 15:06 · For: Chapter 1 ~ Out of Dust and Ashes ~

He could not bear it. All he had ever wanted, from a child, holding his sister in that cold, dark chamber in Tol-in-Gaurhoth, was to be with the Elves. Even just seeing them would have been enough. The dream of being accepted by them, he had long since discarded like a worn out boot, but to be in their company, listening to the mellifluous voices, watching them, shining like diamonds, glittering, passion in every turn of the head, every flashing smile, fed some ancient need in him, warmed the coldness of his heart. He shivered, the shudder of a child, hungry and afraid in the dark.

 

And now...

 

Loneliness roared within him, blasting him hollow. He did not weep, had forgotten how, but he bowed his head hard into his hands.

He had not known what would happen, had failed to realise what Fëanor was, what his meeting Melkor, that clash of power-upon-power would do. Fingolfin had been the catalyst, dying in glory. After that, nothing and no-one could have turned Fëanor from his course. A supernova.

 

You wring me out when I read Vanimore now- such self scrifice and such epic denial- and here he is with nothing... and caught in this never-ending cycle of war, with no peace or joy. Hope there is a happier ending in this one for him. As always, I am in awe of the poetry of your wtiting and the images that just seem effortlessly drawn.



Name: Nuredhel (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2019 13:04 · For: Chapter 3 ~ Blossoming ~

This is magnificent, such a unique and different take on the story. I think it is a very good twist to make both Fëanor and Fingolfin sons of Elernil, it fits way better with the idea of the imperishable flame within them both, and also, i have always felt that Finarfin was different from his older brothers somehow, he comes out as more mellow and somehow lacking, he just havent got their fire. The idea of Vanimore changing the trees were ingenious, so subtle and yet with such an effect. The valar do seem like spoiled children who wants it all and are incapable of understandig why they cannot have it. A truly great story, i love the way it involves the universes of Verhalen and Naryaflame.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you very much, Nuredhel

 

I always wanted to have Edenel as the father of Fëanor and Fingolfin, as he’s much more like them, and they both even look like him, even in my Prime universe. And it’s always a delight to include Verhalen and Narya’s ‘verses. 

 

As for the Trees, lol, Vanimórë did what he’s best at — interfering lol! 



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