Reviews For In Another Life.
Name: NelyafinweFeanorion (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2018 4:15 · For: Chapter 1
So glad you posted it! Looking forward to what comes next!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Nelya! Your suggestions and tweaks did wonders on bringing the story together for me. :)
Name: Narya (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2018 14:12 · For: Chapter 1
Aww, Gabriel, thank you, this is so lovely of you! What a fantastic gift; the descriptions are really rich and vivid, and your Maglor is magnetic:
Wisps of leonine black hair drifted across his features with the breeze, the wealth of which was secured in a neat bun at the back of his head. But it was his eyes which completely captivated her; they were silver with a hint of blue in their depths, so pale in colour they almost shone with their own inner light.
Yup, I can see him perfectly in my mind's eye. And this made me chortle:
an old woman tapped Maglor on the shoulder, “If you two are quite finished…, I would like to order a Cappuccino, before I die!”
Also - a cat called Silmaril! How adorable! :D
Thank you so much for writing this for me, Gabriel. It was an intriguing first chapter and I'm really looking forwards to seeing where it goes, and what the history is between these two! ***Hugs***
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Narya! It has made my day. 'The descriptions are really rich and vivid, and your Maglor is magnetic.' Thank you. I really needed to hear/read that. As first impressions go, I was aiming for Maglor to be quite the hottie. lol. I'm happy that shone through. ;)
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