Reviews For One Moment Changes Everything
Name: Gabriel (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2018 8:56 · For: Chapter 1
This was wonderful! Nelya!
It is so interesting and refreshing to read about Namo and Vaire in a way that doesn't have them selfish powers.
I love how you mentioned Miriel in this. And her sorrow and obvious stress at learning her beloved son had instigated the massacre on the shores of Alqualonde.
The more I think about it the more I feel the emotional impact in this story. How Feanor's decisions and actions have affected everyone, from Namo and Vaire, to Miriel and the Noldor and Teleri. Its quite heartbreaking.
Enjoyed this immensely and would love to see more chapters. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Gabriel--I got the idea when I was writing my Turgon in Mandos story. It made me think of Fëanor, Fingolfin, Fingon, Finrod in the halls and how Námo would respond to each of them. I'm glad you liked Miriel--she would have been recently returned and I am sure this was devastating to her. I've definitely got more ideas for this.
Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2018 22:56 · For: Chapter 1
I like the juxtaposition of th domestic of Vaire and Namo, and the backdrop of immense historical events. I lliked the fact that Mireil was there too.
Author's Response: Thanks Ziggy. It is an idea I've wanted to explore ever since I wrote my Turgon in the Halls of Mandos fic. I've got a lot of ideas for continuation of this.
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