Reviews For Child of Dying Embers
Name: Gabriel (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2017 4:29 · For: Flicker
Great first chapter!
For someone who was thirteen at the time this is a wonderful concept to explore.
You could go a long way with this arafinwean.
I'd run with it! But it's your great idea!
Thank you for sharing this. :)
Author's Response: Ah! You're too kind! It is an interesting idea I will admit but I worry I do not have the skills to give it the story it deserves. I think I will stick with it though, it's been nagging me for quite a while after all.
Name: Spiced Wine (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2017 21:53 · For: Flicker
Well, I would keep going with this, why not? I write a Sauron's son OMC after all :) I know you said that you'd revamped it from when you wrote it, but even so it is a wonderful idea for thirteen year old (I was still writing girl-and-her-pony stories when I was that age :)
Author's Response: Ha! Well thank you! I think I might keep at it, Lachrien has grown on me, my only concern now is where I'm going to find names for the Balrogs in the next chapter :) Also Vanimore is a wonderful OMC! I think he might be one of my favorites! Not gonna lie though, when I was thirteen I was still writing girl-and-her-pony stories too, this idea came when I first read skimmed through the Silmarillion.
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