Reviews For A Midsummer Morning
Name: Gabriel (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2017 2:50 · For: Chapter 1
Hi there, Caunedhiel. I really enjoyed reading this perfect little story.
I like how you chose a young Elleth who doesn't have as great a lineage as some in Gondolin and having her asked to a celebration by the great Lord Glorfindel, superb. Who wouldn't want to be asked to a festival by the Lord of the House of the Golden Flower.
Then there's that Oliphaunt in the room. We all know what this day will bring, which tinges this story with sorrow on this your character's perfect day.
I also wish to ask, if you're planning to expand this story? I would love to read more on the lead up and possibly even a little on the first moments Morgoth's Army assails the city. I'll leave it with you. No pressure. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Glad you liked it :) I have no plans to write anymore at the moment but never say never haha! I am a horribly slow writer the plot bunnies don't bite me very often but if they do I will post as soon as possible Much love caunedhiel xx
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