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Glorfindel
02/19/18 06:25 pm
I hope you are somewhere sunny, Naledi :)
Naledi
02/19/18 08:21 am
Thanks for the birthday wishes, everyone! I had a lovely day and I still have a whole week of holiday to go!
Narya
02/18/18 06:09 pm
Have a wonderful day, Naledi :)
Glorfindel
02/18/18 05:31 pm
Happy Birthday. Naledi!
Spiced Wine
02/18/18 01:15 pm
Many Happy Returns, Naledi :)
Spiced Wine
02/18/18 01:15 pm
Many Happy Returns, Naledi :)
Gabriel
02/18/18 06:54 am
Happy Birthday, Naledi! Have a brilliant day! :)
Narya
02/16/18 10:17 pm
Have a great holiday, Naledi, and happy birthday for Sunday!
Naledi
02/16/18 10:03 pm
Thanks, Ziggy and Ysilme. My birthday is on Sunday. I’m on holiday at the moment, so not able to check in so often.
Spiced Wine
02/16/18 03:50 pm
Oh, I’m so glad, Glorfindel. It must just have been a glitch
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Name: Glorfindel (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 10:14 · For: Chapter 1
I can see the scenes in my mind - I love the sea and you do it very well.
I liked that Osse could change appearance at will and also the part where Cirdan watches the approaching storm.
One to read again!
*Hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks, Glorfindel. It was fun to write the sea images in this, the ocean is such a great subject. I always like to write the Valar as being able to change their appearance at will. If one has the power to do that why not change appearance like we'd change clothes? lol I really appreciate your comments, especially about rereading. That's always great to see.


Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 9:03 · For: Chapter 1

Wow- this was powerful. I love the way this builds, from the quiet hankering for Elwe, the rather charmingly innocent naivety of Osse's approach to Cirdan, and then that moment Cirdan finds himself on the rock in the middle of the sea, that sense of dislocation, almost vertigo. And the incredbile power of the sea/Osse in passion. Lovely writing.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, Ziggy. I had written a previous story about Cirdan and Elwe at Cuiviénen so I thought I'd work their relationship in here too. I also liked the idea that Osse's storms aren't always the result of anger but perhaps something else. :-) I'm glad you enjoyed this one and that the sense of Cirdan being out of his depth came through.


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