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Spiced Wine
04/22/18 09:51 am
We had two storms, late evening and about 1.15, really energetic, incredible lightning! It’s nice this morning though!
Narya
04/21/18 10:08 pm
Beautiful weather again today :) although thunderstorms forecast soon - I am waiting up for it, I love a good storm. How is everyone's weekend so far?
Narya
04/20/18 10:35 pm
Happy Friday :) it's been a gorgeous day here.
Spiced Wine
04/20/18 09:51 am
Happy Friday, everyone :)
Gabriel
04/20/18 12:47 am
Thank you Nelya, thank you Spiced. :)
Spiced Wine
04/19/18 08:22 pm
I’m glad you’ve had a lovely day, Gabriel :)
NelyafinweFeanorion
04/19/18 05:47 pm
Happy birthday Gabriel!
Gabriel
04/19/18 01:04 pm
Thank you so much Narya. I've had a lovely quiet day spending time with family. :)
Spiced Wine
04/18/18 10:08 pm
What a gorgeous day today! Like a taste of summer! I love sitting working with the door open!
Narya
04/18/18 10:07 pm
Happy birthday for tomorrow, Gabriel! (I am travelling for work and likely to be stuck on trains, so might not have chance to say it on the day.)
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Name: Glorfindel (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 10:14 · For: Chapter 1
I can see the scenes in my mind - I love the sea and you do it very well.
I liked that Osse could change appearance at will and also the part where Cirdan watches the approaching storm.
One to read again!
*Hugs*

Author's Response: Thanks, Glorfindel. It was fun to write the sea images in this, the ocean is such a great subject. I always like to write the Valar as being able to change their appearance at will. If one has the power to do that why not change appearance like we'd change clothes? lol I really appreciate your comments, especially about rereading. That's always great to see.


Name: ziggy (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2017 9:03 · For: Chapter 1

Wow- this was powerful. I love the way this builds, from the quiet hankering for Elwe, the rather charmingly innocent naivety of Osse's approach to Cirdan, and then that moment Cirdan finds himself on the rock in the middle of the sea, that sense of dislocation, almost vertigo. And the incredbile power of the sea/Osse in passion. Lovely writing.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, Ziggy. I had written a previous story about Cirdan and Elwe at Cuiviénen so I thought I'd work their relationship in here too. I also liked the idea that Osse's storms aren't always the result of anger but perhaps something else. :-) I'm glad you enjoyed this one and that the sense of Cirdan being out of his depth came through.


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