That is really a dark story - but I like all of your stories and this one as well. It was lovely to read about Glorfindel - he is also one of my favourite characters - right behind Thranduil of course :-)
For a moment I was little confused but I guessed Maglor=Makalaure, right? Can you explain me how this double names work? :)
Author's Response: Hello, so glad you liked it, yes it turned out to be completely dark, sort of demanded that so i had to obey. The name thing is something many get confused by, the fact is that back in the first age most elves, at least those in Valinor had at least Three names, A father name, which Your fahter gave you, a mother name which Your mother gave you and often a Family/nick name. So Makalaure is Maglor's mother name, His fahter name is Kanafinw
Oh my god, I love every single word of this story. I love it when Maglor is so dark and powerful. It's almost exactly how I envision him. I can't really tell you how much this story warms my heart.
I'll read it over and over again, never growing bored or sick of it.
Author's Response: Oh dear, i am blushing here!! So glad you liked it, yes, i sort of got that vision of him straight into my head, and it was so cool i couldnt resist using it. He is such an interesting character and there are endless posibillities to explore regarding him. Thank you so much for Reading and reviewing :)