:blushes: Ok, confession time: I have a weakness for Fëanorion incest, if you couldn't tell lol This story certainly had it all! Maglor was my favorite part, the way he just went from brother to brother, tormenting them. And also the way Curufin wakes up! I could see him just popping up with a scowl on his face and bed-head!
Thanks for feeding my weakness lol
I kind of view the Feanorian Family as incestous half the time, just without sex usually. They're a small community, independent and don't need outsiders, usually. Sometimes I wonder what happened hadn't Finwe been a king but the head of an Avari clan. It would've worked out better. (I'll regret bringing this up. So little time to write, so many ideas, lol.)
And yeah, I kind of got Curufin the best. It seems so very him. Outrage at early mornings over his interrupted beauty sleep. Which makes Feanor being so laid back kind of amazing but I think you have to be with seven sons running around. There can't be much which fazes him.
I'll respond the other reviews later. It'll take patience to answer them all and right now I use the little free time I have for writing the next chapter.
The end was hilarious, i bet poor Nolofinw