Eek! If Thuringwethil can take on any form, this could get very complicated. I hope Amy's right about her valar half taking over. But I'd wondered whether Galadriel's vision was going to come true, and now we know.
Aargh! No - don't let Thranduil be nobbled by the vampire. The others might not like him, but I do! Oh, and I hope Elrohir and Legolas get together as well :)
I love Thranduil here - a wonderful aura of power and danger. How's he going to react now he knows Amy is Orome's daughter?
Ooh - Thranduil as a seductive megalomaniac? I like him already!
I liked the bit about the light of the Orcs' souls getting separated from the corrupt part of them when they were killed. I've not seen that idea before, but it's nice to know the elves that were corrupted to make the Orcs were saved in the end :)
And they're off! I can't wait to see how Gandalf plans to get them around the spiders.
Yay! Elladan doesn't have to choose mortality after all. I like how they discovered the truth about Amy. Now I just hope they can find a way to close the portal without killing her.
Oh no - I can't bear the thought of Elladan and Elrohir being separated. I hope there's a way around this.
I like the idea of them going to Mirkwood, though. I doubt Thranduil will be pleased!
Oh no! What's happened now?
I'm a bit worried about Elladan recognising Amy as his 'one'. I don't like to think of him choosing mortality. Also, if Amy isn't supposed to be in Middle-earth, how could she be intended for him at all? Clearly Eru works in mysterious ways!
Yay! Gandalf's arrived! But what has he seen?
She is something that shouldn’t even exist, a relic of a time long gone, a ghost of a darkness once vanquished. “
Galadriel sat down again, slowly, Elrond looked shocked and Elladan had grown pale. Amy hoped that this didn’t ruin her chances with him.
That made me chuckle! I Amy's wry commentary on what she's seeing in Imladris, despite the dire outlook.
Eek! I hope something can be done to avert the future Galadriel's seeing!
Hahaha! Poor Amy - Middle-earth really isn't the place to be if she's arachnophobic! And that dream...does it mean none other than Ungoliant hitched a lift with her?
Ah - I'm guessing Amy's just met Elladan and Elrohir. I love her first reaction to them - made me laugh, despite their desperate situation. Who wouldn't want hair like the elves?!
Now I wonder how the elves are going to react to 21st century humans!
Oh my! Something tells me they've landed in Middle-earth. I wonder which part?
Is it horrible of me to be glad the selfish jock met a nasty end?!
He he, no, you are not being horrible, he had it coming he he :)
Wow - great action in this chapter. I can't help wondering if the guy who gave amy the rifle deliberately made sure she couldn't defend herself. I'm glad I was right about the Warg, even though it's bad news for Amy! And the twins are called El and Rin? Looks like I was right about them too!
Margaret's death was so sad. Maybe she only made a short appearance in the story, but she was a lovely character. It's nice to see there's more to Mrs Southall than met the eye at first as well. This promises to be an entertaining fic!
An intriguing start. Mysterious twins found wandering in a forest? Elured and Elurin, maybe? Also I'm thinking this strange beast might be a warg. If it is, I feel sorry for anyone that runs into it!
Ok- I have to just stop here and say how much I am enjoying reading this. I'll be honest and say it was Karlmir's reviews that made me give it a chance and I did skim the first chapters a little to see if it was something I wanted to read but here I am thoroughly immersed and intrigued and enjoying it. I did love this scene with Elladan though- particularly humorous and entertaining. I was worried it would be your usual MAry Sue girl falls into ME and that put me off but I am very glad I stuck with it. Your writing is superb, with wonderful descriptions that give enough without overwhelming and there is just enough strangeness created by the movement from one world into this.
Wow, thanks for reading and reviewing, i am very glad you liked it. I may change a bit as the story develops though, there is a reason why she ended up where she did. I am rather proud of that spider scene, it did turn out rather fine, and i think that the differences between the elves and these strangers will be rather apparent as they get more familiar with eachother too. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review, it is greatly appreciated, have a great day :)
This story is rather exciting. I'm surprised that no one else has reviewed it yet.
I am very glad that you like it, it will probably become a bit more traditional along the way but i think the main character and her friends will keep things interesting still :) thank you so much for reviewing, so glad to see a real review that isnt some darn spam bot, cursed be them :) Have a nice day :)
I must say that this is certainly the most original Middle Earth fan fiction story I've ever read, thus far. I look forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, very glad you like it. I think a huuge Cultural clash is on the way, and some both hilarious and serious situations. Thank you so much for Reading and leaving a review, it makes my day :)
Is this story supposed to be taking place at any particular state park, or is the location fictional?
Author's Response: Hello, thanks for Reading :) I was a bit inspired by both Yosemite and Yellowstone :) Sort of mixed those two together, it is very AU so... Hope you like this Chapter, updates will come, but i dont know when. Have a great day :)