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Name: Memaizaka (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2015 12:27 · For: Chapter 1
I really like how you described Caranthir's tangle of emotions here, from jealousy to worry (loved the bit about his brothers' reactions), but especially his possessiveness. And even though I like Aredhel a lot, I have to say I enjoyed the negative take on her relationship with Celegorm (not that Caranthir would be well disposed to that in any case, I guess).
Thank you :) I wanted to write something a bit different. And Caranthir is not a reliable narrator.
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