Reviews For Under the moon we did hunt
Name: rikwen96 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2014 0:50 · For: A fathers nightmare
This is a very interesting story. The plot to have two shapechangers emerge into the world of the Elves is different than the normal change of worlds I have read about. I like the way that you have Rick and Shoroya handle their differences and how they are able to meet and understand the new world they now inhabit.
One thing I did notice and I think it is because you are translating from your native tongue - is that in the third chapter you have Legolas as being twenty years old, in the last chapter he is thirty-nine years old. The older age is probably more appropriate for the story you are telling here.
I hope that you continue with this story as I would like to see how it ends. It's a little slow at first but once I had figured out where it was going the whole story dragged me into the drama that was unfolding.
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