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Spiced Wine
08/22/19 06:24 pm
Very good to have you, Lumeriel:)
Lumeriel
08/22/19 06:20 pm
I'm always late for any chat XD Happy to be here!
Spiced Wine
08/21/19 09:45 pm
Welcome, Lizzie :)
Spiced Wine
08/20/19 09:31 pm
It’s lovely :)
ziggy
08/20/19 08:54 pm
Isn't it nice to have so many new writers posting here! Welcome everyone.
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08/19/19 09:38 pm
Thank you for posting here, Lumeriel :)
Spiced Wine
08/17/19 07:33 pm
Under ‘Browse’ on here, you can search for a few things, like categories, ratings and content
Spiced Wine
08/17/19 07:32 pm
They just have Pen name, title and summary
Spiced Wine
08/17/19 07:32 pm
I’ve looked on SWG which is also e-script but can’t see one on there, either.
Spiced Wine
08/17/19 07:30 pm
Even available. E-script is quite old.
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Name: rikwen96 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2014 0:50 · For: A fathers nightmare
This is a very interesting story. The plot to have two shapechangers emerge into the world of the Elves is different than the normal change of worlds I have read about. I like the way that you have Rick and Shoroya handle their differences and how they are able to meet and understand the new world they now inhabit.

One thing I did notice and I think it is because you are translating from your native tongue - is that in the third chapter you have Legolas as being twenty years old, in the last chapter he is thirty-nine years old. The older age is probably more appropriate for the story you are telling here.

I hope that you continue with this story as I would like to see how it ends. It's a little slow at first but once I had figured out where it was going the whole story dragged me into the drama that was unfolding.


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