Reviews For The fallen one
Name: Spiced Wine (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2014 22:49 · For: In the hands of evil
Nuredhel - I would like to read this, but it would be easier if you edited your spacing. You're uploading it as if it's a physical book, but reading online is different, and you have to split up paragraphs and conversations more. Double space between two people speaking, and before every new paragraph - otherwise it becomes a wall of text which is very difficult to read online.
If you look at any longer chapters on the most recent, Speaker to Customers or Curious Wombat for instance, you can see how they're spacing.
Author's Response: Hello, thanks for the tip, i will see if i can change that, i think i may have chosen the wrong settings in my Word program, will see to it :) Nice to see that you would like to read this. Thanks; Nuredhel.
Name: Spiced Wine (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2014 14:48 · For: The prisoner
This is a very interesting start :) It reminds me of my OC Balrog, Coldagnir, who also looked like an angel in 'human' form.
I will be interested to see where this goes :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for Reading and the review, the Next Chapters are probably coming rather soon, there will be some more explanations and some action and so on. I hope you will like them too. Thanks again. :)
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