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~ Magnificat of the Damned. Book IV: Anvil ~ by Spiced Wine Mature
From Angmar to the Dagor Dagorath. The final story in the Magnificat of the Damned series. The Doom and destiny of the...
Where the Shadows Lie by ziggy General Audiences
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Gabriel
05/28/18 09:01 am
the story to sound right or flow together. Having a little trouble with this in particular. If not, that's perfectly fine. Just wanted to throw it out there. Thanks.:)
Gabriel
05/28/18 08:56 am
Hi guys! I was just wondering if anyone knows of a good beta reader. not just someone who would be willing to dot the i's and cross the t's but someone who could help with getting-
ziggy
05/27/18 07:20 pm
You are the World'sGreatest Auntie, clearly. Bringing on and educating the next generation!
Naledi
05/27/18 05:07 pm
LOL! She’s totally obsessed. Almost as much as me. Just did an hour’s drive and she was talking about Legolas the whole way :D
ziggy
05/27/18 12:23 pm
What an intelligent and wonderful child. Obviousy takes after her Auntie.
Naledi
05/27/18 07:53 am
My work as an auntie is done :D
Naledi
05/27/18 07:51 am
6yo niece is staying at the moment and we’ve been watching LOTR. Niece: why didn’t they make Legolas king? He’s much better and he’s prettier too.
Naledi
05/27/18 07:49 am
Happy Birthday Nelya!
NelyafinweFeanorion
05/27/18 05:08 am
Thank you all!! It's been a wonderful day! Looking forward to reading the new book my husband found for me--"Hobbit to Hero--the making of Tolkien's King"
ziggy
05/27/18 12:33 am
Happy Birthday Nelya- have a lovely day:) x
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Name: Spiced Wine (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2014 22:49 · For: In the hands of evil
Nuredhel - I would like to read this, but it would be easier if you edited your spacing. You're uploading it as if it's a physical book, but reading online is different, and you have to split up paragraphs and conversations more. Double space between two people speaking, and before every new paragraph - otherwise it becomes a wall of text which is very difficult to read online.

If you look at any longer chapters on the most recent, Speaker to Customers or Curious Wombat for instance, you can see how they're spacing.

Author's Response: Hello, thanks for the tip, i will see if i can change that, i think i may have chosen the wrong settings in my Word program, will see to it :) Nice to see that you would like to read this. Thanks; Nuredhel.


Name: Spiced Wine (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2014 14:48 · For: The prisoner
This is a very interesting start :) It reminds me of my OC Balrog, Coldagnir, who also looked like an angel in 'human' form.

I will be interested to see where this goes :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for Reading and the review, the Next Chapters are probably coming rather soon, there will be some more explanations and some action and so on. I hope you will like them too. Thanks again. :)


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