A lovely study on the Twins' isolation. I liked the hope at the end, the sense that they were both starting to heal.
Author's Response: Hi Naledi I'm so flattered you liked it. I really wanted to show them finally starting to break out of their guilt and misery and begin to live again. I'm glad I got that across. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
I enjoyed reading these two pieces, Kimic. They are well written and I htink the characters more than one dimensional even if each is mired in their own confused emotion. Real sense of action as well. Welcoem to Faerie! Keep writing.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh Ziggy thank you for reveiwing. I beyond pleased that you liked these little snippets. I'm trying to get a feel for the twins in my head.I was very worried about the action so I'm glad it came off well. Thank you for the warm welcome!